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towards the stable lands.
Lenticularly,
with latent vivacity that underlies,
along with the sparkling surf of dreams,
with latent vivacity that underlies,
along with the sparkling surf of dreams,
filled with unkempt vitality , I rise.
Capturing its peak ,the envisaged height,
with its mighty crust spread wide,
Capturing its peak ,the envisaged height,
with its mighty crust spread wide,
with bubbles mingling with air,
slowly , I subside.
Gingerly,
approaching the conclusion of the voyage I lead .
approaching the conclusion of the voyage I lead .
reaching my exide, beginning another journey,
passively into the anonymous, I recede.
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dear diary
On basic notes , the poem simply depicts the journey of wave of rising and then falling back ,but on a metamorphic note it depicts the different stages of life just from comfortable childhood to vivid adult hood to old age and then n the anonymous journey of death. Isn't life just like a wave? isn't the picture above depicting the very fact ? Well , I found it to be so. :)
yours
school girl
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Nice poem dear
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Deletegood stuff. I feel I am not equipped enough to comment on your poetic skills, but I liked what I read. I like the comparison you have drawn with waves.
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Deletecomparing life to waves shows lot of thought...nice write
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DeleteThat was nice. Reflecting about life through the journey of a wave.
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You made me remember sine waves with those peaks and crests! Nice way to relate a wave to life - no better way to describe life's ups and downs! ATB for BAT!
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Deletewell that was a little beyond what I wanted to convey, yet I can relate with you very well :P
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passively into anonymous i recede...good one !
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