when the clouds of emptiness
hover over the eyes.
when the dark corner of loneliness bestow.
do I have a right to
refuge in your arms ?
do I have a right to
embrace you tight?
when the reminiscences
of those stinging words
unleashes those tearful cry's.
do I have a right to
curse you?
do I have a right to
recall you and fight?
when you promised me to
be forever be mine.
when you left me shattered
with a wicked smile.
did I have a right to
question you why?
did I have a right to
call you mine?
That was painful... too painful!
ReplyDeleteLiked the lucid description painting the whole scene in reader's mind so vivid.
thank you dear.:D
Deletehappy that the poem's emotions were well conveyed!:D
BEE-rilliant! ;) Keep the fingers typing!
ReplyDeletethanks kappu :D
Deleteglad that you liked it :D
keep dropping by , I would love to hear your views on my different write-ups :D
vivid...pain personified.
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